A New Logline for "The Between"

I think one of the hardest things to do in writing is to summarize your story in a few clean sentences. This is about iteration number 7 for "The Between", the current work in progress.

Lydia, raised as a changeling child in the Mortal world, is drawn into a centuries-long spat between Oberon and Titania. With each of the Fairy Courts struggling to assert its control of her and her latent power, Lydia must use Fey magic to survive even as she clings to her 'humanity'. The Fey get far more than they bargain for when she fuels her Fey abilities with the very human power of love and loss.

So what do you think? Would this description draw you into reading the novel? I'd appreciate any comments (why/why not) that you care to share.

Many thanks!